poemranker ::Dublin, 4-10-04 by myles

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Dublin, 4-10-04

Member since 2004 · Posted 3 Oct 2004 · 1 comment

"wear the white trousers", My mother said. Which brought to mind My grandfather, long dead. He had worn grey plaid, How then could I wear white? He knew his own failures, While I hide from the light. Still I see the bright pants, Crisp and warm and clean. My mother tells me "wear them", And I know I will give in.

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[5] zodiac 4-Oct-04/4:55 AM Reply
The Hughes and McDannells
In Glasgow wear flannels,
The Marches in Carisle wear tweeds;

But all of them doff 'em
For Foul Sue of Poffham
And seem (but aren't quite) the same breed.