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Best Friends (Free verse) by lil_evil_boi
Someone I can talk to. Someone I can trust. Someone who will be there when my relationships rust. Someone who will save me. when everything goes wrong. Someone who will soothe me, and encourage me to be strong. Someone to cry with. To know my tears. Someone to hide with. To know my fears. Someone to hold. Someone to care. Someone I know will always be there. Someone of hope. Someone of love. Someone to do for me all of the above. Someone who listens at any time of day. Someone who will brighten any sky that’s grey. Someone who will always want to be my friend. Someone who will fight for me until the bitter end. Someone with a voice of comfort. Someone with the voice of fun. Someone to play with out in the bright sun. Someone with faith.Someone with hope. Someone with a power that will help me cope. Someone who will always think of me before themselves. Someone who will care for me and put their worries onto shelves. This is a person. Someone to be there until the end. This is what makes someone my best friend.

Up the ladder: none
Down the ladder: Gone Bad

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7766
Posted: June 1, 2005 5:49 PM PDT; Last modified: June 4, 2005 5:37 PM PDT
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Comments:
[5] deleted user @ 81.69.23.196 | 1-Jun-05/6:24 PM | Reply
...Looking for God, perhaps?
Or Ben Affleck?
[n/a] lil_evil_boi @ 70.68.76.244 > deleted user | 1-Jun-05/7:22 PM | Reply
You know, I never consider about this before, not until you mentioned it. I guess it could be about looking for God. Ben Affleck is acceptable. But as the author, i would prefer God.
[6] shrutikay @ 219.65.91.171 | 2-Jun-05/12:12 PM | Reply
funny coment there.....neways./..the poems..gud
[n/a] untamed_fierce @ 70.68.76.244 | 6-Jun-05/4:54 PM | Reply
OMG...i love your poems! More!
[n/a] lil_evil_boi @ 70.68.76.244 > untamed_fierce | 7-Jun-05/7:48 PM | Reply
Thanks once again. You ahve been VERY supportive.
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