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Losing To Anatomy (Free verse) by Blindpoetry

I saw your face It was bleeding Your tears are your disgrace I'm not leaving You can touch my life And heal me Bandages, Bandages From you; They love me I recieve life And partake in history Watch my heart beat Beat you to the ground Watch yourself lose Lose to the anatomy

Blindpoetry 5-Mar-05/10:10 AM
What I sort[of] try to express is that looks are mostly always what people find. And it ends up being horribly wrong once you get to know the good looking fella who ends up being a retarded dumbass.

Make sense? ;) But I wrote this poem with something else in mind that even i couldn't really put in words, sort[of].




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