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Free verse № 108520

You and I

Member since 2004 · Posted 15 Jul 2004 · 1 comment

Take my hand don't let go or you'll get lost Look in my eyes Do you see a light? A light that shines so bright? If you do then you're the one for me and me alone You're the one for me because you held my hand and didn't let go and you saw a light shining through me eyes A light that binds us together forever.

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[8] sliver 30-Jun-05/10:38 PM Reply
So few really look in the eyes, it's always something else.Yet blue eyes can be a harbour for a lost soul.