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Hard To Tell (Free verse) by New Life Drug
So the sun has set, now summer feels years away
as cold brushes against my face, I can't feel you
but fall is here again
Reaching for sleep, so hard to find these nights
with you on my mind.
The warm earth never goes away even when rain falls,
just like your words playing like a movie in my head
And streets with names remind me of loud sounds I used to hear.
Can the ground mean something,
other than muddy shoes?
And when will the stars be gone for good,
while I wait for time to pass?
If I closed my eyes now,
would it all come back to me?
It's so hard to tell...
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7754
Posted: October 4, 2003 2:55 PM PDT; Last modified: October 4, 2003 2:55 PM PDT
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