Poemranker [Poem: Chaos] [by Artemis745] Thu Nov 21 10:19:02 PST 2024

Confusion appearing now Chaos causing peace Heartaches all around Homicidal tendencies running deep A single person's cowardice Damaging few, But affecting the masses. Someone trying to make a difference; Being pushed back two steps For every three he takes. The world we live in Full of hatred and disgust, Could it possibly have any hope?

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7753

Posted: October 2, 2003 9:54 PM PDT; Last modified: October 2, 2003 9:54 PM PDT
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[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 3-Oct-03/12:51 AM | Reply

This reminds me of the time I tried to construct a synthetic butler from a surplus beggar and a discount plus-sized wedding dress. It was tremendously exciting until I realised I had given him the powerful hind legs of a bee, and he simply leapt over the manor into the rolling green hills of Weatherby Estate. But good heavens, enough about me.

This is an astoundingly stupid poeme, Sir. -10-

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