poemranker ::The Creator by the_unknown_angel83

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The Creator

Member since 2003 · Posted 25 Sep 2003 · 0 comments

The light by day ends by night The night travels on for eternity Eternity never stops by the ocean The sea is bottomless in the universe The world never remains longer than the creator The creator lives longer than the stars The fire eventually comes out of the darkness Still the darkness is an entirely different world Earth proceeds like the creator announced it Eternity goes on hereafter Nevertheless the creator still lives longer than the stars.

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