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My Life (Free verse) by Fire_is_cool
My life is a long tunnel, A lightless tunnel with no end, Here I walk alone, Here I will die, No one cares that I am gone, No one ever cared, No one ever will.

Up the ladder: Sprouts From the Jar
Down the ladder: Wry Edward's wry smile

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7759
Posted: April 14, 2004 6:15 PM PDT; Last modified: April 14, 2004 6:15 PM PDT
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[6] edpeterson @ 68.79.14.47 | 14-Apr-04/6:59 PM | Reply
umm if you die, does the tunnel grow an end?
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