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Sprouts From the Jar (Free verse) by hatedestruction
here is where the story is unfolding
where you find your mind to be bleak
once you have opened your mind and molded
what was once the very thing you seek
having not but one chance at glory
and making choices extremely carefully
you find that if you open your mind
that you can once again recover time
memory is not but time in a jar
and opening the jar with damp hands is hard
but once the jar is unscrewed and free
then you can finally rest with me
inside this place you sometimes hate
but you still find a way to stay
while only people talk to you
you do more than most people do
I love your sweet memory in my head
and long for a wish to be granted
but only in my memory do I hold
what seeds you once have planted
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7758
Posted: January 22, 2004 8:29 AM PST; Last modified: January 22, 2004 8:29 AM PST
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