poemranker ::Sprouts From the Jar by hatedestruction

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Free verse № 79961

Sprouts From the Jar

Member since 2004 · Posted 22 Jan 2004 · 3 comments

here is where the story is unfolding where you find your mind to be bleak once you have opened your mind and molded what was once the very thing you seek having not but one chance at glory and making choices extremely carefully you find that if you open your mind that you can once again recover time memory is not but time in a jar and opening the jar with damp hands is hard but once the jar is unscrewed and free then you can finally rest with me inside this place you sometimes hate but you still find a way to stay while only people talk to you you do more than most people do I love your sweet memory in my head and long for a wish to be granted but only in my memory do I hold what seeds you once have planted

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[0] Everyone 22-Jan-04/9:58 AM Reply
Absolute tosh.
[n/a] hatedestruction 22-Jan-04/10:17 AM Reply
ahh.. at least you are ranking the poetry now, and not the person..
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › hatedestruction 23-Jan-04/8:31 AM Reply
You're a giant bender.