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Who's on First? (Free verse) by Melanie Jade Eyes on the prize
Win another
Smile, blush and nod
Go place it in your case
Shelf life of forever
A half life that starts at one
Get off get off get off
I would but I'm not even on
When win win say when
Like taking candy from a baby
They don't know what they're missing
Who's your momma?
Repossessed, repress
Here's a plate of milk and cookies I made you
Safe, you're safe
Now go home.
Up the ladder:
Your Turn (revised)
Down the ladder:
A Child of Scheol
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Posted: November 4, 2007 2:32 PM PST; Last modified: November 4, 2007 4:00 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.9205313 Overall Rank: 9463 Comments:
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Melanie Jade @ 216.61.132.105
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4-Nov-07/2:42 PM
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Originally, I considered the title "Who's UP first". Strike out?
Sound like you got a good batch of l.s.d.
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