poemranker ::Who's on First? by Melanie Jade

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Who's on First?

Member since 2007 · Posted 4 Nov 2007 · Edited 4 Nov 2007 · 2 comments

Eyes on the prize Win another Smile, blush and nod Go place it in your case Shelf life of forever A half life that starts at one Get off get off get off I would but I'm not even on When win win say when Like taking candy from a baby They don't know what they're missing Who's your momma? Repossessed, repress Here's a plate of milk and cookies I made you Safe, you're safe Now go home.

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[n/a] Melanie Jade 4-Nov-07/2:42 PM Reply
Originally, I considered the title "Who's UP first". Strike out?
[8] sliver 12-Nov-07/6:23 PM Reply
Sound like you got a good batch of l.s.d.