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Castle in the Clouds (Free verse) by TLRufener
As I laid down in the grass,
Just a day ago;
I watched the clouds
As they passed above.
I picked out their shapes;
A flower,
A dragon,
A mighty steed;
They were all picture-perfect.
One cloud caught my attention
As it floated by.
It was a peculiar shape;
It resembled a castle;
Four towers marked the corners,
Stretching way up to the sky;
A drawbridge held by chains
Lowered to welcome company.
It sparkled like the sun itself,
Offering an open invitation;
Telling me that Iâm overdue
For a really long vacation.
I would have loved to visit;
Even just for a little while.
But I let it pass overhead,
And cast it off with a smile.
Maybe on another day,
Iâll visit that castle in the clouds.
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Posted: September 17, 2005 8:11 PM PDT; Last modified: September 17, 2005 8:11 PM PDT
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