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Castle in the Clouds (Free verse) by TLRufener

As I laid down in the grass, Just a day ago; I watched the clouds As they passed above. I picked out their shapes; A flower, A dragon, A mighty steed; They were all picture-perfect. One cloud caught my attention As it floated by. It was a peculiar shape; It resembled a castle; Four towers marked the corners, Stretching way up to the sky; A drawbridge held by chains Lowered to welcome company. It sparkled like the sun itself, Offering an open invitation; Telling me that I’m overdue For a really long vacation. I would have loved to visit; Even just for a little while. But I let it pass overhead, And cast it off with a smile. Maybe on another day, I’ll visit that castle in the clouds.

electroman1979 18-Sep-05/1:13 PM
liked it. maybe someday i'll visit as well, heck, maybe even move there -8-




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