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Who's on First? (Free verse) by Melanie Jade

Eyes on the prize Win another Smile, blush and nod Go place it in your case Shelf life of forever A half life that starts at one Get off get off get off I would but I'm not even on When win win say when Like taking candy from a baby They don't know what they're missing Who's your momma? Repossessed, repress Here's a plate of milk and cookies I made you Safe, you're safe Now go home.

Melanie Jade 4-Nov-07/2:42 PM
Originally, I considered the title "Who's UP first". Strike out?




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