replying on The Finger of my Mind by sliver
16 Aug 2004, 9:50 PM
All these hits and no more comments? come on!
on don't feel by caitydee
16 Aug 2004, 9:48 PM
Damn caity, wasn't worth it at all, was it?
Readit again, out loud, maybe three times.
By the way, I meant the relationship, not the poem.
Readit again, out loud, maybe three times.
By the way, I meant the relationship, not the poem.
replying on Who are the best poets on poemranker? (A list by me) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
16 Aug 2004, 8:40 PM
ask me if i really give a shit, considering that I came in 34th, and hoarus, bvaba, wharever he calls yourself has given me nothing but a majority of gooose eggs. what da heall,eh?
on Certain circles by INTRANSIT
10 Aug 2004, 10:47 PM
I grow with these people, as I do with you. DON'T NEGLECT ME!I can always use your help. Please.
on Countdown by TearsOnRoses
10 Aug 2004, 10:42 PM
Listen....... Do you hear it? Never count your days. just learn to enjoy them. thanks for you vote on my poem old friends. read some more and tell me what you think. my e-mail is posted. thanks again.
on The Sky and the Pond by somemorepoetry
10 Aug 2004, 10:23 PM
I can only be happy that I decided to come back here tonight. I live in southeast Colorado, And I've seen three tornadoes from my front porc tonight, not to mention the two trees that I saw on fire tonight. I had to wait at one and call the fdp[ because it was just a flamin! Thanks .
replying on Old Friends by sliver
22 Jul 2004, 3:23 PM
Just luck, as I'm sure you know.
on Desert Rain by donmiguel1960
27 Jun 2004, 11:03 PM
Ahhh metaphore. A region I have not achieved.
l.19, scent?
Stanza 6, I think agai is abused,Just delete the second one, it isn't needed.
Hearts are sad, yearning for the healing to return.
By the way, thanks for the votes and comments my friend.
l.19, scent?
Stanza 6, I think agai is abused,Just delete the second one, it isn't needed.
Hearts are sad, yearning for the healing to return.
By the way, thanks for the votes and comments my friend.
replying on Y Tylluanod by Blurgerocity
27 Jun 2004, 10:49 PM
est terra,sorry.
on Y Tylluanod by Blurgerocity
27 Jun 2004, 10:48 PM
Umm, that's not latin, none of it. Confiteor natura et terra. But the english parts sounded good to my intoxicated mind.
on your best friend by New Life Drug
27 Jun 2004, 10:44 PM
He must mean alot.
on Broken Wings by donmiguel1960
21 Jun 2004, 9:05 PM
For some reason I kept picturing the Holy Spirit. You say you have never written before? what a way to start!
on I never really knew by donmiguel1960
21 Jun 2004, 8:54 PM
Giving is everything. Read 'I Will Stay' by NoSage. that is my opinion. And yes, it is the truest form of happiness, charity. I have never felt better than when I can be of service to someone in need, and I thank God for giving me the skills necessary to help many people.
on Exquisite butterflies by donmiguel1960
21 Jun 2004, 8:48 PM
A painful way to live. You really need to quit now, I can't add everything you write to my favorites. on second thought, keep writing. Do you mind if I print a few of yours out?
on unbroken bottle by skaskowski
21 Jun 2004, 8:30 PM
So much to imbibe, I fear I must read this one several times. great work.
on Quiet, Kind Hills by Dovina
21 Jun 2004, 8:27 PM
It would seem that you have a solid foundation. Enjoy .
on Goin' For Broke by MacFrantic
21 Jun 2004, 8:13 PM
Busted. Reminds me of a time not too many years ago. I was probably looking for something else tho'.
on Sonnetias by MacFrantic
21 Jun 2004, 8:07 PM
So true. Well done.
regret, 6
continuity, 2 {of again and shadows}?
intensity 8.
rewrite. total 6