| Re: Corner of 30th and Tibbs by klosterfobik |
16-Aug-04/9:56 PM |
Punctuation, 0
regret, 6
continuity, 2 {of again and shadows}?
intensity 8.
rewrite. total 6
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| Re: a comment on The Finger of my Mind by sliver |
16-Aug-04/9:50 PM |
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All these hits and no more comments? come on!
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| Re: don't feel by caitydee |
16-Aug-04/9:48 PM |
Damn caity, wasn't worth it at all, was it?
Readit again, out loud, maybe three times.
By the way, I meant the relationship, not the poem.
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| Re: a comment on Who are the best poets on poemranker? (A list by me) by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
16-Aug-04/8:40 PM |
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ask me if i really give a shit, considering that I came in 34th, and hoarus, bvaba, wharever he calls yourself has given me nothing but a majority of gooose eggs. what da heall,eh?
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| Re: Certain circles by INTRANSIT |
10-Aug-04/10:47 PM |
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I grow with these people, as I do with you. DON'T NEGLECT ME!I can always use your help. Please.
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| Re: Countdown by TearsOnRoses |
10-Aug-04/10:42 PM |
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Listen....... Do you hear it? Never count your days. just learn to enjoy them. thanks for you vote on my poem old friends. read some more and tell me what you think. my e-mail is posted. thanks again.
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| Re: The Sky and the Pond by somemorepoetry |
10-Aug-04/10:23 PM |
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I can only be happy that I decided to come back here tonight. I live in southeast Colorado, And I've seen three tornadoes from my front porc tonight, not to mention the two trees that I saw on fire tonight. I had to wait at one and call the fdp[ because it was just a flamin! Thanks .
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| Re: a comment on Old Friends by sliver |
22-Jul-04/3:23 PM |
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Just luck, as I'm sure you know.
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| Re: Desert Rain by donmiguel1960 |
27-Jun-04/11:03 PM |
Ahhh metaphore. A region I have not achieved.
l.19, scent?
Stanza 6, I think agai is abused,Just delete the second one, it isn't needed.
Hearts are sad, yearning for the healing to return.
By the way, thanks for the votes and comments my friend.
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| Re: Tough by Dovina |
27-Jun-04/10:51 PM |
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Guess you grew up on him.
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| Re: a comment on Y Tylluanod by Blurgerocity |
27-Jun-04/10:49 PM |
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| Re: Y Tylluanod by Blurgerocity |
27-Jun-04/10:48 PM |
Umm, that's not latin, none of it. Confiteor natura et terra. But the english parts sounded good to my intoxicated mind.
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| Re: your best friend by New Life Drug |
27-Jun-04/10:44 PM |
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| Re: Broken Wings by donmiguel1960 |
21-Jun-04/9:05 PM |
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For some reason I kept picturing the Holy Spirit. You say you have never written before? what a way to start!
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| Re: I never really knew by donmiguel1960 |
21-Jun-04/8:54 PM |
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Giving is everything. Read 'I Will Stay' by NoSage. that is my opinion. And yes, it is the truest form of happiness, charity. I have never felt better than when I can be of service to someone in need, and I thank God for giving me the skills necessary to help many people.
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| Re: Exquisite butterflies by donmiguel1960 |
21-Jun-04/8:48 PM |
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A painful way to live. You really need to quit now, I can't add everything you write to my favorites. on second thought, keep writing. Do you mind if I print a few of yours out?
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| Re: unbroken bottle by skaskowski |
21-Jun-04/8:30 PM |
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So much to imbibe, I fear I must read this one several times. great work.
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| Re: Quiet, Kind Hills by Dovina |
21-Jun-04/8:27 PM |
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It would seem that you have a solid foundation. Enjoy .
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| Re: Goin' For Broke by MacFrantic |
21-Jun-04/8:13 PM |
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Busted. Reminds me of a time not too many years ago. I was probably looking for something else tho'.
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| Re: Sonnetias by MacFrantic |
21-Jun-04/8:07 PM |
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