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Desert Rain (Free verse) by donmiguel1960
The blustery weather gusts forward
A Scent of earth and tears commingle
Leaves fly across expressions
Anticipation of the tempest forms
Mysterious clouds on the horizon
Vistas of streams commencing from the skies
Torrent is drawing nearer
The earth begging for relief
A thousand years have broken
Gradually, unquestionably the reward is presented
In an instant water pouring
Exhilaration appears all so enduring
Just as all comfort is assured
The desert rain seems to slow to a mist
Please donât prevent the rain
The brooks are not yet brought back
The wilderness downpour has closed
Unyielding scorching of the sun ruptures throughout
All has a sweet sent of relief
Blessing the land was short lived
A thousand years begin again
Hearts are sad again, yearning for the healing to return
Lifeâs barren region grows hot
Only hoping to survive to the next desert rain
Miguel Antonio Francis
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Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5775
Posted: June 26, 2004 12:15 AM PDT; Last modified: June 26, 2004 12:15 AM PDT
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when to lovers treat eachother in a kind loving way with tenderness and respect. This is the rain, otherwise life's barren region grows hot.