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Old Friends

by sliver

Member since 2002 · Posted 21 May 2004 · Edited 21 May 2004 · 27 comments

A single star Cradled in a crescent moon. Shedding a light More silver than blue. A wedding tomorrow. Will that star still be there? Is it some kind of omen For the love they share. It's funny how I can see it from here, How they come together, In the heavens without fear. I'll be watching tonight To see if they meet again. To cradle like lovers Or kiss like old friends.

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A favorite of pinay_miss_azn, Heather Dee.

27 comments

[10] electroman1979 21-May-04/8:10 PM Reply
good poem, i wish them well as well
[8] thepinkbunnyofdoom 21-May-04/11:53 PM Reply
beautifully expression.
[9] tadpole 22-May-04/9:42 PM Reply
glad to see your poetry again
[10] arduinn 17-Jun-04/1:19 AM Reply
Great flow of words..
[0] Bachus 17-Jun-04/12:30 PM Reply
Rump
[10] Brittanyy 11-Jul-04/8:24 AM Reply
I really like this poem..Nuff said.
[0] horus8 14-Jul-04/12:33 PM Reply
Old Rearends By Captain Napkin


A wedding mannana
Somewhere in Rowanda
The groom has AIDS
As Uranus fades
Away, yadda yadda
yadda.
[10] donmiguel1960 16-Jul-04/9:05 AM Reply
very very nice
[9] TearsOnRoses 18-Jul-04/7:37 AM Reply
Beautiful poem. :)
[10] INTRANSIT 20-Jul-04/8:09 AM Reply
Well! Obviously you no longer need my help. Fine work.
[n/a] sliver › INTRANSIT 22-Jul-04/3:23 PM Reply
Just luck, as I'm sure you know.
[10] x0lovelylarnx0 20-Jul-04/7:31 PM Reply
I think the poem was nicely writen!
[0] leonxic 3-Aug-04/5:51 AM Reply
It sucks; I hate it. But if it's any consolation, the title was just as shitty as the poem.
[0] Bachus › leonxic 8-Sep-04/12:04 PM Reply
Lol
[10] redneck_woman3322 20-Sep-04/2:10 PM Reply
I thought this poem was absolutely great!
[10] Brittanyy 2-Feb-05/9:00 AM Reply
I really like this poem and anyone who says anything bad about it is just jealous because none of their stuff is as good.
[9] pinay_miss_azn 21-Jun-05/6:51 PM Reply
nice, very nice. :)
[n/a] sliver › pinay_miss_azn 30-Jun-05/10:24 PM Reply
Thank you, that means alot to me.
[10] Heather Dee 7-Sep-05/1:14 AM Reply
Great poem I love it!!!!!!!!!!
[10] deleted user 13-Oct-05/5:07 PM Reply
OK...so why did you say I gave you a zero when imnotgoodatpoetry did???? Whats up with that Sliver? I GAVE you a ten....
[10] deleted user 10-Dec-05/4:13 PM Reply
This is an excellent poem.
[5] veggiegurl 24-Dec-05/4:16 PM Reply
ehhh its alright I give it a five :)
[7] Sisterwolf 28-Dec-05/7:22 PM Reply
I know poetry used to have all first line capitals, but
I feel it lends to the flow if second lines are in
small case.
[7] Sisterwolf 28-Dec-05/7:26 PM Reply
Intranet, may I point out that I got scolded for having made no useful criticism - ie, great work, etal.
This poem has no constructive criticism at all.
No big deal, but I thought about what you said and
have been critiquing to help because I thought praise
was not acceptable comment. Peace!
[6] Edna Sweetlove 15-May-06/4:43 PM Reply
A bit dull.
[7] Engelbert Humpalot 10-Aug-06/10:14 AM Reply
Quite nice really. Innocent and charming. Like me.
[7] Engelbert Humpalot 21-Aug-06/9:55 AM Reply
Not at all bad. Well done!