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Old Friends (Free verse) by sliver

A single star Cradled in a crescent moon. Shedding a light More silver than blue. A wedding tomorrow. Will that star still be there? Is it some kind of omen For the love they share. It's funny how I can see it from here, How they come together, In the heavens without fear. I'll be watching tonight To see if they meet again. To cradle like lovers Or kiss like old friends.

Sisterwolf 28-Dec-05/7:26 PM
Intranet, may I point out that I got scolded for having made no useful criticism - ie, great work, etal.
This poem has no constructive criticism at all.
No big deal, but I thought about what you said and
have been critiquing to help because I thought praise
was not acceptable comment. Peace!




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