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don't feel (Free verse) by caitydee
don't feel, you,
don't feel sorry for me
the sympathy moves in your direction
thought I saw the calm in your gray eyes
now I see nothing but the empty truth
devoid of warmth or sentiments
how did someone so cold keep me so warm at night?
Oh, its not that you're cold hearted, its weakness
don't feel sorry for me because I cry
my tears, feelings; its strength,
more weight than all your biceps could carry
your muscles crumble under its' weight
can't deal with the pain from a heart
you won't bother with one at all
don't feel sorry for me
you can't feel
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6
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Posted: August 16, 2004 12:11 AM PDT; Last modified: August 16, 2004 12:11 AM PDT
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Readit again, out loud, maybe three times.
By the way, I meant the relationship, not the poem.