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Free verse № 110610

don't feel

by caitydee

Member since 2004 · Posted 16 Aug 2004 · 2 comments

don't feel, you, don't feel sorry for me the sympathy moves in your direction thought I saw the calm in your gray eyes now I see nothing but the empty truth devoid of warmth or sentiments how did someone so cold keep me so warm at night? Oh, its not that you're cold hearted, its weakness don't feel sorry for me because I cry my tears, feelings; its strength, more weight than all your biceps could carry your muscles crumble under its' weight can't deal with the pain from a heart you won't bother with one at all don't feel sorry for me you can't feel

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[8] sliver 16-Aug-04/9:48 PM Reply
Damn caity, wasn't worth it at all, was it?
Readit again, out loud, maybe three times.
By the way, I meant the relationship, not the poem.
[n/a] caitydee › sliver 19-Aug-04/8:02 PM Reply
I don't know...live and learn I guess...I was probably a bit harsh, I got heated in the moment you know? So it probably wasn't completely worthless..but who knows! :)