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your best friend (Free verse) by New Life Drug
I saw your best friend today he reminded me so much of you its not that you're the same or even alike its what I thought i'd find my eyes expected your face to be around but for a moment I forgot that you're gone and out of town wish I could tell you all the scenes from movies in which we saw I know we'd have a good laugh I know we'd have a good talk and when we left he was off to swim just like you would have been if you were here and when he smiled all I thought of were your jokes just like you would have been tellin' if you were close to home all I can do now is picture you out there on the road looking bored and out that car window the only thing that's keeping me going is looking forward to the end of summer but while you're nowhere to be found i'll still have fun ill still have dreams of winning a hundred thousand and fifty one dollars with you

Up the ladder: Watching
Down the ladder: Being Used

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.8211956
Overall Rank: 10874
Posted: June 27, 2004 10:25 PM PDT; Last modified: June 27, 2004 10:25 PM PDT
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Comments:
[7] sliver @ 63.190.73.67 | 27-Jun-04/10:44 PM | Reply
He must mean alot.
[5] Dovina @ 24.52.157.176 | 28-Jun-04/7:43 AM | Reply
Missing someone. Not very well told.
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