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Autumn (Free verse) by keatsImnot
Autumn time is coming The leaves fall from the trees They fall like little paratroopers Landing on their knees Nights are getting longer Days are getting short Not much time for playing Not much time for sport Apples ripening on the trees Birds migrating overseas Weather now is getting cool Soon we're going back to school


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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.8211956
Overall Rank: 10871
Posted: July 7, 2005 7:48 AM PDT; Last modified: July 7, 2005 7:48 AM PDT
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[3] Bankrupt_Word_Clerk @ 71.130.168.209 | 7-Jul-05/2:33 PM | Reply
Autumn by definition is a time.
[6] Dovina @ 69.175.32.185 | 7-Jul-05/2:42 PM | Reply
I'd like to see more than just a description of autumn.
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