Little Girl

Member since 2004 · Posted 29 Jun 2004 · 2 comments

Little Girl why aren't you Outside Playing with the others Is it because you have lost Your sense of innocence Because your were touched were you Should never have been Little Girl where is the sparkle In your eyes Have the abuse took it away Left you feeling scared and afaid Without anywhere to turn Little Girl in time you will Heal and begin to laugh again Your Creativity And Faith in God is what is going to heal you.

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[7] Dovina 29-Jun-04/4:01 PM Reply

This is good, except for telling her what to do in the last two lines.

[4] nentwined 30-Jun-04/11:16 AM Reply

spelling and grammar would help this. still too much telling for me.