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Sporadic Schizophrenia? Definately. (Free verse) by Y2kSlamPoet
Youth and spirit torn endured every weapon contrived. Reborn a child of scorn soul was weak but still survived. Wandered the oil & beer concrete driven to think later- attack first. Bloodied knuckles made me complete after having quelled liquor thirst. Got a phone with a keyboard obsession made me go techno. The mouse was a cool sword but the connection was too slow. Found a pen & became a renegade consumed all I could learn. Isolation & regret made spirit fade smoked what would burn. And then? bought a soup pot & ladle mixed it all together- added lightbulbs with priests blood; which led me to the light that came from the most convoluted star in the depths of space. After that.. "things got way wierd" When I turned seventeen my star collapsed- punched a black hole then sucked me in. Today? Is my return- finally spewed out, having learned the art of turning darkness into light- yes, DARKNESS INTO LIGHT like making a nigger white? Anyway, I'm bonkers over being a cat racist? Its quaint- or simply the stupidest bias that my mind has ever sprung to date. Hate spork too: its nigger catnip, no really that stupid cat would cease defecating mid-release just to eat it. Could of made it eat its own shit for some spork- interesting isn't it? If you've made it this far: fear me I'll influence your children but thats after raiding the kitchen and snatching your living room lamp-bulbs.

Up the ladder: keys
Down the ladder: ONCE(revised)

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.8211956
Overall Rank: 10887
Posted: November 28, 2003 4:22 AM PST; Last modified: November 28, 2003 4:22 AM PST
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[n/a] Everyone @ 163.1.146.87 | 28-Nov-03/5:02 AM | Reply
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