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keys (Free verse) by ay deee
wrapped around my belt and buttoned through itself is a nice little piece of leather stitched with a brass clip a push of my thumb releases an oversized key ring all day i open doors unlock padlocks wrap a cable around my bicycle i retrieve tools i lock doors and let people into places they can't normally go i start my truck that's what the one with the pink band is for and purple for the house the rectangular key yellow lets me in to work without these i don't know what i'd do lance forgot his keys in mississippi i had to let him in today


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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.8211956
Overall Rank: 10886
Posted: September 7, 2005 9:16 PM PDT; Last modified: September 7, 2005 9:16 PM PDT
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[4] wilco @ 66.61.101.130 | 8-Sep-05/1:10 PM | Reply
Oooo! Oooo! You're a janitor! I love this game...
[n/a] ay deee @ 204.90.50.252 > wilco | 9-Sep-05/12:36 PM | Reply
no janitor here
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