I enjoyed it, hallmarkey or not.

Some parts grabbed me much more than others, but I actually liked this a little, surprised? hell shocked me.

Much better than the other one I read. You should spend some time reading some of the stuff here, might do you good.

oooh k, kinda common, try to spice it up.

Well done wilco, I really enjoyed reading this one!

An inescapable truth. (Unless you believe in incarnation, then it's still inescapable, you just don't know it.)

Now that's what I call hitting the perverbial nail on the head!

don't know what to think for sure. the style is new to me, and it seems a bit forced in places. Overall a good pome tho'

So true. Well done.

It would seem he found his strength in Catholicism. But it is better to be a true Catholic, than to pretend to be.

now this, I like.

Forgetfulness is bliss. By the way <3?

I think I'm real close to what I wanted to be back then, except for the money of course.

Enjoyable, I can allmost see you behind those walls.

Vote on mine I'll vote on yours!

Keep writing about writing,
Have fat women sing,
If the waiters must come
Have them bring more bling bling

Seems to stop. abruptly. once too many, times. rewrite.

Ya know, I'd like to give this a zero, not because I don't like it, but for the 0's you've given me .. on better things. still, I think the o's are for others to come, but not from me.