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Guilt Trip (Lyric) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
Pour me another round and drive me across town To a house that we all know, sit back, and enjoy the show Watch as I burn it down, burn her house to the ground So no memories will be found, of the girl, that I once knew So that I can forget you :Chorus: Pour me another glass and make sure its strong Proceed to tell me all the things that I've done wrong Make sure you scream it loud and clear Because I want the whole damn world to hear How I've done you wrong, How I'VE DONE YOU WRONG How For So Long All I've Done Is DO YOU WRONG Get me a shovel and a pack of cigarettes Because I'm digging up things you'd rather forget Like the bones of a boy Buried deep beneath your bed A simple tombstone over his head One word it read, DEAD ::Chorus:: Like the Morningstar, fallen ever so far I'll be just another scar, on your leg Another deep cut that you'll hide Another failed attempt at suicide

Up the ladder: Upside down and tigers
Down the ladder: The Hand of God

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.962963
Weighted score: 6.9581094
Overall Rank: 143
Posted: August 15, 2004 1:48 PM PDT; Last modified: August 15, 2004 1:48 PM PDT
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Comments:
[6] sliver @ 63.189.17.70 | 16-Aug-04/10:25 PM | Reply
Ya know, I'd like to give this a zero, not because I don't like it, but for the 0's you've given me .. on better things. still, I think the o's are for others to come, but not from me.
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 66.213.67.10 > sliver | 23-Aug-04/2:02 PM | Reply
If I gave you a zero its because I thought it was absolutely devoid of any original thought, lacking strong writing, and horridly boring. No offence but have you ever looked at my voting status? The ratio is dreadfully top heavey. I'm glad you can see past being petty and spiteful but I voted as I have always voted. How I thought it was merited.

<3 Jason
[6] sliver @ 152.163.253.4 > thepinkbunnyofdoom | 23-Aug-04/9:12 PM | Reply
And still you will notice that I have a higher average. Hmmm, Top heavy? where have all your top 10 poems been?
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 216.196.145.191 > sliver | 25-Aug-04/11:12 PM | Reply
Not the rating of my work, my rating of the works of others at this particular site. On average I'd say I was in the overly 7-9 voting range.

<3 is a heart, meaning heart Jason = emo kid wishing you the best. And I've been top 10 in pimple since it became a option for poem type. God is a Lady, Speaking my Mind Brilliant Idea, and few others have had their fair share of time in the top ten slot.
[9] Dan garcia-Black @ 66.218.59.183 | 17-Aug-04/8:10 AM | Reply
Lyrics are tough to rate because of the singsong nature of the meter and the rhyme. I think it would work as long as Bono or Sting don't sing it.
[10] Eydn @ 69.92.168.235 | 23-Sep-05/10:01 AM | Reply
I really like these lyrics......can actually hear this one with music. That is usually the true test of good lyrics and you have written some great ones.
[1] Edna Sweetlove @ 81.179.82.204 | 10-Aug-06/11:48 AM | Reply
Crap.
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 66.213.67.10 > Edna Sweetlove | 12-Aug-06/9:15 AM | Reply
Really? You don't say? I'm surprised you feel that way considering that all of my live audiences have loved it and clapped, every time I'm ever sung it.
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 66.213.67.10 > thepinkbunnyofdoom | 12-Aug-06/9:15 AM | Reply
*I'm should be I've.
[n/a] ALChemy @ 71.75.188.163 > thepinkbunnyofdoom | 12-Aug-06/9:18 AM | Reply
She's actually Chinese and has trouble pronouncing her L's.
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 66.213.67.10 > ALChemy | 12-Aug-06/9:49 AM | Reply
That explains every thing, save for the meaning of life.
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