Poemranker [Poem: The Hand of God] [by Christof] Sat Nov 23 02:23:50 PST 2024

[9] razorgrin @ 142.166.108.64 | 27-Aug-02/6:48 AM | Reply

It's too fickin' early and this one is perfect.

[9] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 27-Aug-02/8:29 AM | Reply

ironic, well done

[10] god'swife @ 209.178.177.44 | 28-Aug-02/9:12 AM | Reply

Are you published? Have you self published? I'm interested in having some of your poems in a proper book I can read.

[9] Tarquin De La Bog @ 62.6.113.15 | 28-Aug-02/9:48 AM | Reply

I like this alot. 9. The piece is pithy yet detailed, and the final line is beautifully simple in comparison to the vague imagery of the poem. Nice one.

[n/a] Christof @ | 29-Aug-02/1:14 AM | Reply

That's very kind Mrs God. I've had odd pieces published here and there in small mags in Britain, but certainly not in book form. No one wnats my stuff enough! But I'm glad you do. Thank you.

[10] god'swife @ 209.179.212.229 | 29-Aug-02/9:33 AM | Reply

Firstly I love this poem because it sets you up for the punch line and then actually delivers. Secondly there's alot of images and I love images. Wall and chink./wound which it inflicts. Are great images for God, but sand moulded bt faith, is completely brilliant. I voted earlier but I'll vote again 8

[n/a] Christof @ | 29-Aug-02/9:40 AM | Reply

If I ever get published, I'm getting you to write the blurb on the back.

[10] god'swife @ 209.179.212.229 | 29-Aug-02/9:44 AM | Reply

That would be an honor. Can you send me some of your poems so I can start working on it. I think your e-mails posted isn't it?

[n/a] Christof @ | 29-Aug-02/9:47 AM | Reply

Yes my email is posted - send me a message if you like. I'll sort out a little file of things for you tomorrow if you'd like it. Right now I have to go - I'm at work and work's ended, so I'm off for some food. But thanks for all your support, it's great.

[n/a] Christof @ | 29-Aug-02/9:49 AM | Reply

See you tomorrow!

[9] dolores @ 217.35.80.128 | 30-Aug-02/7:51 AM | Reply

Good work-9/10

[n/a] Amelia @ 198.146.142.233 | 3-Sep-02/8:39 AM | Reply

I actually like it. It's good. By the way I didn't know there was an Englander here. Nice to meet ya!

[n/a] Christof @ | 3-Sep-02/8:41 AM | Reply

It's good to be an island of Englishness, although I think I miss out on a lot of references. It's an education. Glad you liked the poem.

[8] OneFingerAnswer @ 216.138.10.5 | 23-Sep-02/9:18 PM | Reply

How is it that I some how missed your work until tonight?

[n/a] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 > OneFingerAnswer | 24-Sep-02/12:59 AM | Reply

I don't know but I'm glad to see that you like it my friend!

[8] daniella @ 200.45.51.140 | 19-Oct-02/10:05 PM | Reply

how we try to image Him into our humanity.... He is always ready, are we willing?

[8] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 16-Jun-03/2:54 PM | Reply

Snooze button blues. Your symbolism in this piece is definitely beta realm sleep depravation.