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crash&burn (Free verse) by AM I EVIL? going fast tires spinning
sharp left turn now there skidding
spin the weel but your not turning
the edge is coming you can see it
scream out loud no one hears you
200 foot cliff and now your falling
close your eyes remember your life
what were the last words to your wife?
your time is coming it has claimed you
you see the ground coming faster
but its slow motion slow as plaster
what the hell happned,questions turning
you hit the ground and now your burning
Up the ladder:
Church Propagation
Down the ladder:
season #3
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Posted: September 2, 2004 9:43 PM PDT; Last modified: September 2, 2004 9:43 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.3099275 Overall Rank: 3607 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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AM I EVIL? @ 64.114.105.13
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2-Sep-04/9:44 PM
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i really like this peice... it puts me in a certain state of mind
I LIKE THIS POEM! THAT MAY SOUND A LITTLE MORBID SINCE THAT THE POEM IS ABOUT DEATH. BUT I DO, I REALLY LIKE IT!
Much better than the other one I read. You should spend some time reading some of the stuff here, might do you good.
You leave the reader anxious to find out the outcome...lots of mystery in your poems...this one I liked too....
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