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crash&burn (Free verse) by AM I EVIL?

going fast tires spinning sharp left turn now there skidding spin the weel but your not turning the edge is coming you can see it scream out loud no one hears you 200 foot cliff and now your falling close your eyes remember your life what were the last words to your wife? your time is coming it has claimed you you see the ground coming faster but its slow motion slow as plaster what the hell happned,questions turning you hit the ground and now your burning

sliver 3-Sep-04/10:19 AM
Much better than the other one I read. You should spend some time reading some of the stuff here, might do you good.




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