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Trust (Free verse) by QuirkyWonder
The bond that makes Every relationship possible Is held in your hands Like an egg Until you squeeze too hard And break it BOOM! Just like that Everything changes Everything is ruined You're now back at Square one Which is way behind Where you first started I gave you my faith That you would be honest But you lied anyway!

Up the ladder: dot.com
Down the ladder: The Ring

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.3333334
Weighted score: 4.5629225
Overall Rank: 12644
Posted: August 16, 2004 10:44 PM PDT; Last modified: August 16, 2004 10:44 PM PDT
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[n/a] sliver @ 63.189.17.70 | 16-Aug-04/10:51 PM | Reply
Vote on mine I'll vote on yours!
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