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Free verse № 105545

Of Gifts

Member since 2003 · Posted 17 Jun 2004 · 4 comments

Son... Look upon your father's face Remember the glow about him Always knowing that The Melodies surround him He might not be famous But there is something to the tune Strummed along in the sunny afternoon While watching kiddy cartoons Know my son that the dark beauty you hear Is the bleeding of my soul From heart to fingertips Giving voice the sorrow of these lips You'll never see daddy on mtv But you might find one of his old cd's With the haunting melodies Beautiful and Beyond Compare Remember Son . . . Every Father has a gift to give his child Whether tis heavy a sight or lite a sound Every Mother a kiss, and Some Good Advice Give in to her whim, Before your big swim -------------------------------------- <3 // Luzr \\ >3 \\ Bunny // ------------------------------------- I think I need medication

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4 comments

[9] wilco 17-Jun-04/4:04 PM Reply
You wascally wabbit.
[10] Bachus 17-Jun-04/4:50 PM Reply
Mtv, and then perhaps, a tidy bowl commercial.
[9] sliver 23-Aug-04/9:17 PM Reply
now this, I like.
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › sliver 25-Aug-04/11:15 PM Reply
Thanks, random writing on the spot while ripped as fuck, waiting for my best friend's wife to get out of labor.

<3 Jason