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Of Gifts (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
Son... Look upon your father's face Remember the glow about him Always knowing that The Melodies surround him He might not be famous But there is something to the tune Strummed along in the sunny afternoon While watching kiddy cartoons Know my son that the dark beauty you hear Is the bleeding of my soul From heart to fingertips Giving voice the sorrow of these lips You'll never see daddy on mtv But you might find one of his old cd's With the haunting melodies Beautiful and Beyond Compare Remember Son . . . Every Father has a gift to give his child Whether tis heavy a sight or lite a sound Every Mother a kiss, and Some Good Advice Give in to her whim, Before your big swim -------------------------------------- <3 // Luzr \\ >3 \\ Bunny // ------------------------------------- I think I need medication

Up the ladder: naive gazer

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.636364
Weighted score: 6.818182
Overall Rank: 373
Posted: June 17, 2004 12:36 PM PDT; Last modified: June 17, 2004 12:36 PM PDT
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Comments:
[9] wilco @ 24.176.102.131 | 17-Jun-04/4:04 PM | Reply
You wascally wabbit.
[10] Bachus @ 24.130.62.63 | 17-Jun-04/4:50 PM | Reply
Mtv, and then perhaps, a tidy bowl commercial.
[9] sliver @ 152.163.252.165 | 23-Aug-04/9:17 PM | Reply
now this, I like.
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 216.196.145.191 > sliver | 25-Aug-04/11:15 PM | Reply
Thanks, random writing on the spot while ripped as fuck, waiting for my best friend's wife to get out of labor.

<3 Jason
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