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Oriental buffet on the rim of a volcano (Haiku) by Bachus Posh art neon print
flickering in front of me
Suspicious oysters
Up the ladder:
Of Gifts
Down the ladder:
I have no problem with short people of color or religion
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Posted: September 9, 2003 11:30 AM PDT; Last modified: September 9, 2003 12:32 PM PDTWeighted score: 6.816925 Overall Rank: 374 Comments:
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Bill Z Bub @ 24.43.48.67
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9-Sep-03/1:45 PM
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It was bad clams, I tells ya. This could benefit from a punctuation mark somewhere.
suck them vigorously right out of their shells.
What's a week on the brink? What's tea time without chiarscurro Elvis peeping at you from over your plate.
WOW I totally dont get it. But thats nothing new Haiku frequently confuse me. However it is fun to read
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