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Oriental buffet on the rim of a volcano (Haiku) by Bachus

Posh art neon print flickering in front of me Suspicious oysters

Bill Z Bub 9-Sep-03/1:45 PM
It was bad clams, I tells ya. This could benefit from a punctuation mark somewhere.




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