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Of Gifts (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

Son... Look upon your father's face Remember the glow about him Always knowing that The Melodies surround him He might not be famous But there is something to the tune Strummed along in the sunny afternoon While watching kiddy cartoons Know my son that the dark beauty you hear Is the bleeding of my soul From heart to fingertips Giving voice the sorrow of these lips You'll never see daddy on mtv But you might find one of his old cd's With the haunting melodies Beautiful and Beyond Compare Remember Son . . . Every Father has a gift to give his child Whether tis heavy a sight or lite a sound Every Mother a kiss, and Some Good Advice Give in to her whim, Before your big swim -------------------------------------- <3 // Luzr \\ >3 \\ Bunny // ------------------------------------- I think I need medication

wilco 17-Jun-04/4:04 PM
You wascally wabbit.




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