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Quiet, Kind Hills (Free verse) by Dovina
Back in the old country, The history of me is long. Feelings of death and desolation Hang in abandoned homesteads, Tower houses, ringforts, and castles. At every turn, I come across all that’s left, Perhaps just a foundation Or roofless stone walls, Doomed habitations, Of lives that will never be remembered. Yet no depression accompanies, Here with quiet, kind hills all about. The loneliness in these vacated frames Feels hidden and safe. In their shells I build another, Which, like most of these, Will never be found.

Up the ladder: Ad patres el prostitute
Down the ladder: Wonder

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6666665
Weighted score: 6.467995
Overall Rank: 706
Posted: June 21, 2004 8:37 AM PDT; Last modified: June 21, 2004 8:37 AM PDT
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[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 163.1.146.135 | 21-Jun-04/9:46 AM | Reply
An excellent poeme! No... wait that's daft... a GOOD poeme. But I'll have to end this comment with a caveat, because 'caveat' is rather a trendy word at the mo, and being trendy is one of the most excellent things a person can be (caveat: there is no fucking caveat) -10-
[9] MacFrantic @ 198.81.26.16 | 21-Jun-04/11:57 AM | Reply
Wholesome house-building goodness. *9*
[7] Shardik @ 24.130.62.63 | 21-Jun-04/1:46 PM | Reply
This sounded like this porno parody of that movie the "Hours" I watched the other day, it was called the "Showers".
[8] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 21-Jun-04/6:03 PM | Reply
nice to see "ringforts"
[10] sliver @ 63.190.80.214 | 21-Jun-04/8:27 PM | Reply
It would seem that you have a solid foundation. Enjoy .
[n/a] Dovina @ 24.52.157.176 > sliver | 22-Jun-04/7:50 AM | Reply
Thank you all for your comments. They have been helpful.
[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 163.1.146.135 > Dovina | 22-Jun-04/11:10 AM | Reply
Really?
[n/a] Dovina @ 24.52.157.176 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 22-Jun-04/12:14 PM | Reply
"Helpful" is anything above 0, anything that says it might not be totally idiodic to continue posting here, your vote and comment, for example.
[n/a] richa @ 81.178.236.72 > Dovina | 22-Jun-04/12:33 PM | Reply
'"Helpful" is anything above 0'.

Boll'cks.
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