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Free verse № 105958

Quiet, Kind Hills

Member since 2004 · Posted 21 Jun 2004 · 9 comments

Back in the old country, The history of me is long. Feelings of death and desolation Hang in abandoned homesteads, Tower houses, ringforts, and castles. At every turn, I come across all that’s left, Perhaps just a foundation Or roofless stone walls, Doomed habitations, Of lives that will never be remembered. Yet no depression accompanies, Here with quiet, kind hills all about. The loneliness in these vacated frames Feels hidden and safe. In their shells I build another, Which, like most of these, Will never be found.

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9 comments

[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 21-Jun-04/9:46 AM Reply
An excellent poeme! No... wait that's daft... a GOOD poeme. But I'll have to end this comment with a caveat, because 'caveat' is rather a trendy word at the mo, and being trendy is one of the most excellent things a person can be (caveat: there is no fucking caveat) -10-
[9] MacFrantic 21-Jun-04/11:57 AM Reply
Wholesome house-building goodness. *9*
[7] Shardik 21-Jun-04/1:46 PM Reply
This sounded like this porno parody of that movie the "Hours" I watched the other day, it was called the "Showers".
[8] Shuushin 21-Jun-04/6:03 PM Reply
nice to see "ringforts"
[10] sliver 21-Jun-04/8:27 PM Reply
It would seem that you have a solid foundation. Enjoy .
[n/a] Dovina › sliver 22-Jun-04/7:50 AM Reply
Thank you all for your comments. They have been helpful.
[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › Dovina 22-Jun-04/11:10 AM Reply
Really?
[n/a] Dovina › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 22-Jun-04/12:14 PM Reply
"Helpful" is anything above 0, anything that says it might not be totally idiodic to continue posting here, your vote and comment, for example.
[n/a] richa › Dovina 22-Jun-04/12:33 PM Reply
'"Helpful" is anything above 0'.

Boll'cks.