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Exquisite butterflies

Member since 2004 · Posted 21 Jun 2004 · 2 comments

Exquisite butterflies, restrained for display Kept as a noble prize, yet a puzzling dismay Shades of splendor, formation of majesty Silhouettes so tender, a broken rhapsody Drawn down, pressed with a weighty sky Settled facedown, spirits that can only cry Song is the foe, which is embraced fervently A broken bow, forlorn in time indefinitely Life’s intricacies suggest no way out Besieged to focus, staggering about Groping franticly, to exit this prison Expiring romantically, a poisoned commission Passing memories, exquisite butterflies escape Living obsequies, all of life now takes shape The trappings of mortality, whispering about A shattered finality, broken hearts, filled with doubt Mutually souls conscious, never obtaining fulfillment Only the comfort of having met, to ease the torment Hopeful to forget, wishing to restore the unknowing bliss A walking silhouette, unaware if the enormous abyss Freedom entails broken glass, splintered lights Dreams of the meadows grass, belief that reunites Dare the hazard be engaged? Dare the occasion be measured? To live at risk restaged, or safely die as one that is treasured Miguel Antonio Francis

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[10] sliver 21-Jun-04/8:48 PM Reply
A painful way to live. You really need to quit now, I can't add everything you write to my favorites. on second thought, keep writing. Do you mind if I print a few of yours out?
[n/a] donmiguel1960 › sliver 21-Jun-04/9:56 PM Reply
Tell me about it, not enough xanex. Print to your hearts content. I’ve never written before. Started about 3 weeks ago. Considering I’m 44, that’s a long time to wait. I’ve found inspiration, now I’m trying to lose it.

writing is A clarification of my true anguish