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Exquisite butterflies (Free verse) by donmiguel1960
Exquisite butterflies, restrained for display
Kept as a noble prize, yet a puzzling dismay
Shades of splendor, formation of majesty
Silhouettes so tender, a broken rhapsody
Drawn down, pressed with a weighty sky
Settled facedown, spirits that can only cry
Song is the foe, which is embraced fervently
A broken bow, forlorn in time indefinitely
Lifeâs intricacies suggest no way out
Besieged to focus, staggering about
Groping franticly, to exit this prison
Expiring romantically, a poisoned commission
Passing memories, exquisite butterflies escape
Living obsequies, all of life now takes shape
The trappings of mortality, whispering about
A shattered finality, broken hearts, filled with doubt
Mutually souls conscious, never obtaining fulfillment
Only the comfort of having met, to ease the torment
Hopeful to forget, wishing to restore the unknowing bliss
A walking silhouette, unaware if the enormous abyss
Freedom entails broken glass, splintered lights
Dreams of the meadows grass, belief that reunites
Dare the hazard be engaged? Dare the occasion be measured?
To live at risk restaged, or safely die as one that is treasured
Miguel Antonio Francis
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.1788044
Overall Rank: 4936
Posted: June 21, 2004 8:33 PM PDT; Last modified: June 21, 2004 8:33 PM PDT
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writing is A clarification of my true anguish