| Re: Black Magic by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
7-Apr-03/12:27 PM |
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Closer than I am to anything resembling rythm.
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| Re: the photobooth by Bill Z Bub |
7-Apr-03/12:08 PM |
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Someday I shall write as well as thee.. But for now, I'll just keep on truckin'.
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| Re: a comment on My Tomahawk goes up, UP, AND AWAY! by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
21-Mar-03/1:54 PM |
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DAMN THE TORPEDOES!.......
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| Re: His Dying Words (2nd draft) by Ranger |
21-Mar-03/1:50 PM |
Swap lines 5 and 6 and merge them. You have great potential, especially starting at such a young age. If this fulfills you, and puts a smile on your face, then continue to work at it. (9) I think you're close here.
Very close.
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| Re: My Tomahawk goes up, UP, AND AWAY! by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
21-Mar-03/5:28 AM |
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friggin hilarious!!! let me get you a lawn chair and we'll nosh on red vines and watch eh?
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| Re: The death of Bachus by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
18-Mar-03/8:52 AM |
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| Re: Maud, After the Death of her Daughter Lynn by middenHeap |
14-Mar-03/10:29 AM |
Man. Everyones droppin the V's like a seeder on a farm.
And I haven't the cojones to try one meself. Ah well, all in due time. Pretty good for a practice run.
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| Re: a comment on The 11th hour by INTRANSIT |
14-Mar-03/10:21 AM |
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Thanks Caducus. I'm actually feeling rather flat lately.
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| Re: All Meta-Verse Shall be Deleted, it is Poison by middenHeap |
14-Mar-03/6:46 AM |
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| Re: Dust by Caducus |
14-Mar-03/6:13 AM |
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I waited and it was worth the wait.
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| Re: hard as a rock by <~> |
14-Mar-03/6:10 AM |
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I do blieve you've got the villanelle down pat.
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| Re: The Bloody War Of Angels by Caducus |
13-Mar-03/3:11 PM |
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I believe you've outdone yourself. Have a FWOT.
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| Re: sexy by elizabethann |
13-Mar-03/7:55 AM |
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iron out the telling spots. this can fly.
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| Re: Charm by OneFingerAnswer |
13-Mar-03/7:44 AM |
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Something very intriguing about the v-form. I can't figure its purpose quite yet.
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| Re: Small Teeth in a Glass Bowl by Fear of Garbage |
13-Mar-03/7:41 AM |
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Just for the heck of it, roll this into a villanelle. good as is.
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| Re: The Courtesan by horus8 |
13-Mar-03/6:23 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Icarus Down by horus8 |
12-Mar-03/6:27 PM |
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I have this sudden urge to listen to "Dangerous" By "The Who"
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| Re: Threnody by Nanshe |
12-Mar-03/9:14 AM |
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wonderful wordings from within.
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| Re: Invisible too by horus8 |
12-Mar-03/7:35 AM |
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Flip it he can rip it any style you want.
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| Re: Limericks of hot seething love, gone bad. by horus8 |
12-Mar-03/7:31 AM |
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dreams AND nightmares. aint it da truth
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