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Limericks of hot seething love, gone bad.

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 Mar 2003 · Edited 12 Mar 2003 · 11 comments

Was there ever a day when I knew? Just what a woman could do. To the walls of your heart. 'till death do us part. Dreams, and nightmares, come true. Some things should never be found. Because Love's a patient blood hound. That is hot on your trail. You had better set sail. Since the earth is only so round. If Psyche would have just trusted in Eros, before she busted. The pact that they made, but she chose to trade. True love for a bed that was dusted. Then there was Pandora's box. How the curious woman unlocks. A container of sin. Just watch that bitch grin. Foxes in heat always win.

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[3] wLeBlancw 11-Mar-03/8:33 PM Reply

And the point of your poem is the following: Stay with the hag you have until you fall in love with her since you have no balls to leave. Been there done that. How old are you? 21? 3 for effort.

[3] wLeBlancw › wLeBlancw 11-Mar-03/9:09 PM Reply

somethings=some things

[n/a] horus8 › wLeBlancw 12-Mar-03/1:50 AM Reply

Jealousy + nudity = sophia Loren perching headfirst above my pounding shaft.
Somethings are possible.
Dream a little dream to earn your jealous scream.
I have some butterfly stitches you could model ricky.

[n/a] INTRANSIT › horus8 12-Mar-03/7:30 AM Reply

How dare you blaspheme my fathers sacred girl!!! now twist and shout before I spring you carpeted. fred.

[n/a] horus8 › wLeBlancw 12-Mar-03/5:07 PM Reply

No, actually it's a hidden masonic formula for time travel, and in all honesty has nothing to do with humor, love or history?

[n/a] Caducus 12-Mar-03/5:42 AM Reply

This seems unfinished mate, I was left scrapping for more, or maybe I am greedy today? gotta feel that lurve thang !
Hey H, give me the goss on what you've been up to : endymion29@hotmail.com
You know everythhing from Magnum ads, Beverly D-angelo, being pissed, california gossip beats coventry gossip, man I live in a shithole of a city.

[n/a] horus8 › Caducus 12-Mar-03/11:53 PM Reply

Bevs having a bad break with al right now. super ugly. high power chess with major emotional baggage kinda thing, but bevs smarter then him and that's why he hates her. Well other then the fact that he is oedipus and she represents his father. While she secretly probably turned the screws because he represents the father that never loved her. i'm praying for her. bummer really the whole thing. character assassanations and such. Imagine the nerve, to write or say something bad about another whom you love. lol.

I'm always pissed, can't help it I just keep getting more and more informed and more and more paranoid... I don't know something creepy is going on in ther world currently. It's got me trippin'.
But creatively i don't think i've ever been this tuned in. It's kind of cool. And i'm having a lot of fun being a dad right now, and i think that helps considerably. I'm currently writing a movie with a friend of mine A.J Devlin from AFI (young writer like myself, easy to work with) and producing and costarring in a great script to be movie (that i did not write) This Summer i'm going to Idylwild do a writing workshop, and Toronto or NewYork for some Willy Shakes training. How about you Sir Heartache? Feeling better? You should move if it depressess you, i would. I hate shitty cities like bufallo and madison and fargo GOD fargo! ewe that was shit, sorry i was having flash backs.

[n/a] horus8 › Caducus 12-Mar-03/11:55 PM Reply

By the way... You were right! now, it's finished though. lol.

[n/a] INTRANSIT 12-Mar-03/7:31 AM Reply

dreams AND nightmares. aint it da truth

[6] daniella 21-Mar-03/8:27 PM Reply

how to woo a wooman's heart...

[3] Edna Sweetlove 15-May-06/4:53 PM Reply

Poor.