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alms

Member since 2002 · Posted 7 Jan 2003 · 15 comments

CRY a tear of blood for me as i come to you in sorrow 'tis two days since I last did confess to you whose hands pray to your God and mutter strange musings as you see what is done over the blue line The blue line that produced the Red Clasp your hands and look skyward for me. tell me I'm okay and that I need to stop because HE has a plan So bow your head and don't forget to leave money in the alms box

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15 comments

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 7-Jan-03/6:50 PM Reply

THIS SURE IS GREAT.

[n/a] famenglory › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 7-Jan-03/7:11 PM Reply

is that sarcasm?

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › famenglory 7-Jan-03/7:14 PM Reply

No.

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 7-Jan-03/7:28 PM Reply

Wait, yes.

[n/a] famenglory › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 7-Jan-03/7:29 PM Reply

i'm feelin the love

[4] <~> › famenglory 7-Jan-03/11:02 PM Reply

no doubt. you are driving with only one hand, sir.

[10] deleted user 7-Jan-03/7:17 PM Reply

Poor girl/boy, cut their wrist to ease their pains. it's powerful, i like it.

[7] RGallet 7-Jan-03/7:51 PM Reply

the last bit is a bit trite

[4] <~> › RGallet 7-Jan-03/11:03 PM Reply

oh, yeah. right.

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › <~> 7-Jan-03/11:09 PM Reply

And I can't see you every night.

[4] <~> › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 7-Jan-03/11:19 PM Reply

excuse me. what i meant to say was, "I do think you fit this shoe"!!!!

[9] deleted user 8-Jan-03/1:32 PM Reply

Touches a part of eveyone in some way, i like it

[8] Shardik 24-Jan-03/6:24 PM Reply

I'm not even going to go into how i visualised this finely crafted poeme.

[7] nentwined 26-Jan-03/7:24 AM Reply

cute. 7.

[10] GekoHawaii 27-Jan-03/9:10 PM Reply

Wow. Again I'm impressed. Very deep and true. Like in a higher level hippy spiritual kind of way.