Re: Missing - You by Skamper	26-Nov-07/6:17 PM
Line 9. sectet? dic.com couldn't find it.
Re: Before Dawn by Christof	27-Nov-07/9:33 AM
Klaxon. Great word. Could you say- boy or girl in roiling- ? Or is this a specific person. You?
Re: Addendum to Engine Braking BY INTRANSIT by sliver	23-Dec-07/10:45 AM
Been busy lately, couldn't get round to the ranker. Obviously not the way I was going, (though I did miss my mark ) there's potential here. Drop- Then the, as the, hot brakes, until, a sign, fuck it. condense the jake line and the following line. Make jake a capital OR a corporation.
Re: Sight Reading by Christof	23-Dec-07/10:53 AM
If I could find fault with this, I'd be a professor. That's a compliment, Sir.
Re: Happy Birthday by jessicazee	23-Dec-07/11:00 AM
I don't know what you're doing. I just know it's working.
Re: Milk and gas by Caducus	23-Dec-07/11:03 AM
I wouldn't have gotten that but that's my ignorance about Plath.
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Dec-07/11:04 AM
It's offical. I hate you. Congrats.
Re: Shiver by Skamper	23-Dec-07/11:12 AM
Oh gross! Swap existances competing, drop the hyphen, swap fingers driven. I think you could lose lines 13 and 14 and do no harm. Gross. I love it.
Re: Absorb by Skamper	29-Dec-07/6:08 AM
Strange to see you use -'cos. I don't know why. Good thing you didn't use crumpet. Those things, sheesh. I like the paralells but, I think if you sit on it for a while, there's more to be brought out.9 for what it is now.
Re: Cormac Plays by Skamper	8-Jan-08/2:06 PM
Zero Mostell. Hah! Great stuff.
Re: ayow by skaskowski	15-Aug-08/4:59 PM
ska.
Re: Gadgets and Poems by Dovina	17-Aug-08/4:16 PM
D, I think the whole first sentence should go. I'd like to see the carpets rise be your opener. But that's me. hope you and Kansas are doing fine.
Re: Suicide Note [Disposal Instructions Included] by SupremeDreamer	10-Sep-08/10:08 AM
I'd like to see the first line gone. The title covers it. But the Main part, I'd like to see really odd things there, not the drugs and the sex etc. Not that true grunge doesn't have a place, I'm just not one for "shock" value. Write another one my way please, and I'll compare, and, maybe concede. Whaddaya got ta lose?
Re: :: chameleon by elementalidad	10-Sep-08/10:22 AM
I disagree with Dovina on this one. I think it's the best of the four.
Re: SWF seeks SWM by Bethy	10-Sep-08/10:24 AM
-more nuts, this is wrong. hahahahahaha.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Dec-08/7:55 PM
Dan ! You goofball. S-1 lose the hardware. keep the prize, the psyche, the phil. S-2 merge those last two lines drop the h/h "hate for the sake of gods..." aint it the truth. for all intents and p/r purposes......
Re: Horus, Thy Eye. by SupremeDreamer	28-Dec-08/4:47 PM
Amen. and then some.
Re: 2012 - The Haiku Remix. by DreamerSupreme	28-Dec-08/4:48 PM
wouldn't have to wait if someone would just push the damn thing.
Re: To Poets Whose Writing is Fecal. by SupremeDreamer	2-Jan-09/7:33 PM
http://poemranker.com.poem-details.jsp?id=80113 trying to get moving again, Soup ? I hear ya.
Re: skittles by Freethinker1602	15-Oct-09/11:22 AM
Reword this in a way that eliminates the duplicities. Like -bright colors-- you have more than once. Trust your reader. We've seen skittles. And enjoy them often!