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Absorb (Free verse) by Skamper People say Iâm a sponge
not the cake
not the sweet sticky things
I think they mean a
kitchen sponge
âcos I absorb stuff
like dirt
and mess
I must be one of
those new kinds
that kills all germs
rinses clean
with every shower
and wipes all surfaces
with disinfectant
âcos nothing sticks
know what I mean?
Up the ladder:
Final Dates, part 1: through gates of smoke and salt
Down the ladder:
the only thing worse than living (revised, liberated)
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Posted: December 28, 2007 11:58 PM PST; Last modified: December 28, 2007 11:58 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.1659904 Overall Rank: 5084 Comments:
Answer: Soak it up and spit it out. Good philosophy.
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Good thing you didn't use crumpet. Those things, sheesh. I like the paralells but, I think if you sit on it for a while, there's more to be brought out.9 for what it is now.