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SWF seeks SWM (Free verse) by Bethy Wallflower,
barstool,
pink blouse,
"(such a fool)"
Salted nuts,
alluring grin,
whose heart,
shall I win?
Push-up bra,
conversation,
a drink on me,
intuition.
Breath mints,
a condom too,
sit closer,
it might be you.
Local band,
favorite song,
more nuts,
this is wrong.
Bartender,
last call,
feeling lonely,
feeling small.
Exit sign,
above my head,
cab drive,
alone in bed.
(written a bit ago, made some changes, thanks to you folks)
Up the ladder:
Passive Birth Control
Down the ladder:
What is a poet
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 8.0
Posted: September 4, 2008 9:53 AM PDT; Last modified: September 4, 2008 9:53 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.806824 Overall Rank: 1682 Comments:
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Dovina @ 68.183.245.166
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4-Sep-08/10:08 AM
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Great, been there, usually ends like this. A good description
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Bethy @ 165.154.46.58
> Dovina
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10-Sep-08/12:34 PM
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Thx Dovina, been there, done that, a few times lol
Nice work. I'm sorry that there wasn't a good man there willing to give you that sexual healing- better luck next time.
Blessed with eight.
Thx SD, I'm sorry too, chuckle-chuckle and thx for the promising "next time" lol
Great poem! I love the rhythm. I remember the poem about your legs. One of my favorites! This captures the same feeling.
I'm glad you liked it, and thx for the comments on my other poem as well. You flatter me...I got lots more...lol
-more nuts, this is wrong. hahahahahaha.
Thx my friend, your poetry has made me smile many times as well. :)
It always amuses me when, in between thinking about shoes, women sometimes find time to write poetry.
Does the W stand for White? If so, isn't that racist?
I find the time for sure...you do too...Racist? nope...we are all children of this world. Shoes? I am not a shoe kinda woman, truly I own a few pair, but mostly they consist of flip flops, rubber boots and tasteful sneakers. I have but one very lovely pair of dancing shoes, which also I use for weddings, and funerals. I like to spend my money on male hookers lol wink, just joking. Have a lovely day.
and as for the "W" lets say that it means..."willing"
the meeting seems random enough, yet the parameters are established. equal parts hunter and hunted
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