:: chameleon

by elementalidad

Member since 2008 · Posted 4 Sep 2008 · Edited 4 Sep 2008 · 4 comments

climate fluctuates- little color changer waits basking on a stone

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[9] SupremeDreamer 5-Sep-08/6:08 PM Reply

Observant Nature. Classic execution. Nine.

[7] Dovina 6-Sep-08/6:36 AM Reply

yep, another 575 haiku, straight laced and proper. It needs an "a" to begin Line 2.

[n/a] elementalidad 6-Sep-08/6:42 AM Reply

thanks Supreme and Dovina for your comments across my first three (ever) haikus. Why do you recommend I start with an a on line 2 here? Just curious as I'm learning :)

[9] INTRANSIT 10-Sep-08/10:22 AM Reply

I disagree with Dovina on this one. I think it's the best of the four.