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Milk and gas (Free verse) by Caducus
The Nazi lamp Lazarus
rubbed herself like Vim
around twelve day footprints
facing towards 'the other'.
Hair crowded her temples
once worshipped by quill,
written on two spines,
one falling apart
one almost complete.
She scrubbed away his footprints
finding her Fathers face,
Wolves stood up to the moon
She stood up to the stove
embracing gas like a Nazi
before she died where he walked
Milk was poured in a half empty glass
for half empty children.
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Arithmetic Mean: 9.333333
Weighted score: 5.516546
Overall Rank: 2639
Posted: March 12, 2003 3:12 AM PST; Last modified: December 21, 2007 3:30 AM PST
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