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When I look inside my heart

by Engelbert Humpalot

Member since 2006 · Posted 4 Sep 2006 · Edited 13 Sep 2006 · 9 comments

When I look inside my heart I see nothing. When I look inside my soul I see nothing. When I look inside my pants I see an enormous dong. Anybody wanna suck? If so, I'll give it a wash. But I don't see why I should bother As long as you like Gorganzola.

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A favorite of Engelbert Humpalot, conny lingers.

9 comments

[3] pete 8-Sep-06/8:02 AM Reply
made me laugh i'm ashamed to admit ....
[n/a] Engelbert Humpalot › pete 13-Sep-06/6:07 PM Reply
How about the revised version? Surely that's a turn on?
[3] pete › Engelbert Humpalot 16-Sep-06/9:35 AM Reply
not at all
[4] colbaby 13-Sep-06/6:23 PM Reply
Sensational. Even better than the gerbil one. By the way, it's spelt shlong, not dong.
[10] Edna Sweetlove › colbaby 14-Sep-06/10:25 AM Reply
An excellently caring poem, certainly. And by the way, dong is perfectly OK; and the correct spelling of schlong is schlong.
[6] deleted user 14-Sep-06/11:09 AM Reply
yuk @ gorgonzola, am more of a mascarpone girl myself.
[7] nypoet22 17-Sep-06/4:23 AM Reply
ieeeeeewwwwwwwww...... this transitions from concept poem to gross-out comedy. really it's two different pieces.

i think you should have stopped at "Anybody wanna suck?"
[8] Sing4Jesus! 1-Oct-06/6:41 PM Reply
How obscenely nice.
[10] conny lingers 2-Feb-21/8:50 AM Reply
Mr legless, one-armed, stuttering wife Conny would be happy to oblige.