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When I look inside my heart (Free verse) by Engelbert Humpalot

When I look inside my heart I see nothing. When I look inside my soul I see nothing. When I look inside my pants I see an enormous dong. Anybody wanna suck? If so, I'll give it a wash. But I don't see why I should bother As long as you like Gorganzola.

nypoet22 17-Sep-06/4:23 AM
ieeeeeewwwwwwwww...... this transitions from concept poem to gross-out comedy. really it's two different pieces.

i think you should have stopped at "Anybody wanna suck?"




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