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ayow (Free verse) by skaskowski
i poked my thumb in every block. Though six-sided it held a spot that i could claim. Tied to a die I shamed my name. And every laugh that fell that night was centralized in one delight. The five that failed to fall each throw were deathblows.

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5805
Posted: July 29, 2008 3:23 AM PDT; Last modified: July 29, 2008 3:23 AM PDT
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Comments:
[8] Don-Quixote @ 76.254.27.93 | 29-Jul-08/5:07 PM | Reply
Shootin craps? Gambling addiction? Hmmm.
[8] T. Jonathron Remp @ 76.210.104.80 | 29-Jul-08/11:37 PM | Reply
"was centralized in one delight" = Freudian? LET ME KNOW, K?
[0] Edna Sweetlove @ 85.211.243.48 | 5-Aug-08/8:30 AM | Reply
Utter piffle.
[8] INTRANSIT @ 69.23.141.215 | 15-Aug-08/4:59 PM | Reply
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