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ayow (Free verse) by skaskowski

i poked my thumb in every block. Though six-sided it held a spot that i could claim. Tied to a die I shamed my name. And every laugh that fell that night was centralized in one delight. The five that failed to fall each throw were deathblows.

T. Jonathron Remp 29-Jul-08/11:37 PM
"was centralized in one delight" = Freudian? LET ME KNOW, K?




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