| Re: a comment on Limericks of hot seething love, gone bad. by horus8 |
12-Mar-03/7:30 AM |
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How dare you blaspheme my fathers sacred girl!!! now twist and shout before I spring you carpeted. fred.
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| Re: Anna N. Smiths vagina monologue in Evangelistic tongues by horus8 |
12-Mar-03/7:26 AM |
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For a while I thought you might be giving up the rant-face. Glad you didn't. I feel sorry for her son. She seems incapable of anything of value.
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| Re: The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams by Caducus |
12-Mar-03/7:15 AM |
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It was so long ago, I'm unaware of the changes. Feels strong still.
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| Re: On coming across a field of deer one afternoon (2) by <~> |
11-Mar-03/7:03 AM |
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I know why sprung is there ,but is'nt it past tense? this is happening now, i gather. Your pace is slowed with commas,while hasting? You're slowing something that happens quickly,yes? that is all. compared to v-1 this works better. lighter.
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| Re: a comment on Waiting to exit by INTRANSIT |
11-Mar-03/6:51 AM |
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do you have a moment for "lightest touch"?
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| Re: a comment on Waiting to exit by INTRANSIT |
11-Mar-03/6:48 AM |
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mornin'. metaphor for "american dream" or things along that line. w're taught rules without reasoning. I know it needs work. I'm not framed for it at the moment. thanks z.
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| Re: a comment on Waiting to exit by INTRANSIT |
11-Mar-03/6:23 AM |
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I'm assuming you are referring to this poem. I'm letting it percolate for now. Could use some help with my "eskimo" and my "runes" when you get a moment. I'm particularly fond of them and would like to see them break gravity. glad to see yu are well. thank you.
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| Re: Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof |
10-Mar-03/8:00 PM |
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I still have yet to find a superior.
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| Re: Family Portrait by Mr Pig |
10-Mar-03/7:46 PM |
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Drats! I do believe my speed reading from high school has become malignant.
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| Re: Hecate, and the high hunt by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
10-Mar-03/3:24 PM |
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Glad to see you can still get fired up. FWOT. the only way.
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| Re: Family Portrait by Mr Pig |
10-Mar-03/3:16 PM |
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S-2 L-13 delete or blend ,maybe. I assumed there was a passing of time when the cuckoos flocked. Send your dad your guts.
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| Re: this old man (edit) by Bill Z Bub |
10-Mar-03/5:43 AM |
Ok. What Z said about the hat and line walkers were 2 of my dislikes. Your glitterati swerve to avoid, but they're overhead?
And S-1 old men/this old man/thisle man. You know me, less is more where I come from. lose one i think.
Other than that eees guut,yah.
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| Re: a comment on this old man (edit) by Bill Z Bub |
9-Mar-03/8:18 AM |
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Sorry 'bout that Mr. B. I must've logged off just before you logged on or sumpn. The trky addr is correct. We'll chat about my poem as well.
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| Re: this old man (edit) by Bill Z Bub |
9-Mar-03/6:54 AM |
Like to discuss some beefs I have here. E-mail me.
Canuckistan? I turn at the drowning pines, right?
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| Re: a comment on The lightest touch by INTRANSIT |
9-Mar-03/6:47 AM |
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Your seven suggests a lacking somewhere. Could you point me in the right direction sir?
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| Re: War Begins on Tuesday by Nicholas Jones |
8-Mar-03/2:41 PM |
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Tuesday doesn't work for you? If I move my tae-bo and my luncheon with Mao, I can push the invasion to next Wed. Is that better? good. never put off til tomorrow.....
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| Re: venttent3 by Crakyamuni |
8-Mar-03/2:36 PM |
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venting well. some spelling errs. find em. fix em. that is all.
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| Re: this can be no more than shit by Crakyamuni |
8-Mar-03/2:31 PM |
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ass hair. lol. that puts things in perspective doesn't it?
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| Re: The Rift by Bachus |
8-Mar-03/2:01 PM |
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| Re: if only you could read my mind love by sk8boardandpoems |
8-Mar-03/7:38 AM |
Caducus is most correct. 6 for effort.
And C, A-thank you suh!
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