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Hecate, and the high hunt (Haiku) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
Curved evil breasts. anticipation full moon. Starless sky lover.

Up the ladder: And uncle sam says...
Down the ladder: Cliche

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.5
Weighted score: 6.25
Overall Rank: 923
Posted: March 5, 2003 1:11 PM PST; Last modified: March 9, 2003 11:12 AM PST
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[n/a] TanHand @ 68.14.26.239 | 5-Mar-03/1:33 PM | Reply
THEN SHE POOFS INTO A VAMPYRE AND FLYS AWAY FLAP FLAP FLAP FLAP (RIGHT???)
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 > TanHand | 9-Mar-03/10:14 AM | Reply
You know absolutely nothing about about Mythology. And your incessive facination with vampires can only be clinicaly diagnosed as bipolar with a low-low-low self-esteem. Have you tried St. John's wart. Did you know Narcissus was the first fag? Think about it. And when you condition your hair next remember... Thems my babies under your nails penetrating your scalp. Care for a Danish?
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 9-Mar-03/10:24 AM | Reply
Why the fuck would Hecate have fangs?
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 9-Mar-03/11:09 AM | Reply
Maybe they are a metaphor for her curved evil boobs, James.
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 9-Mar-03/11:18 AM | Reply
I, we, they, them, those. You must assume that my mind has some sort of mechanism that cares enough to differentiate. I don't. To me, you are all the same. Stare in the pond at yourself so long, even the water looks like you. You live a lie. You are a hypocrite. I use to think I could learn something from you other then new words and a more structured style, but now i see that's not going to happen. I'm cutting you loose Da. You're not my hero anymore.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 9-Mar-03/2:20 PM | Reply
oh
[7] DurtKL @ 68.23.223.173 | 5-Mar-03/5:51 PM | Reply
u like greek mythology don't u
[n/a] wLeBlancw @ 198.81.26.167 | 9-Mar-03/12:01 PM | Reply
Curved evil breasts--how can breasts be evil? Can you use a better metaphor?
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 > wLeBlancw | 9-Mar-03/12:25 PM | Reply
Don't be stupid read beuwolf, Grendal, Cinderella, Snow white, misery, boys in highschool across america, the breasts symbolize eve and evil. Please be stupid elsewhere, can't you see i'm working myself up to a high density froth. If i were you i would run, or i'll pelt your stupid poetry with ten 0's in ten minutes. Little chirping christian shit fuck get, lest i compose a leblancian satire whipping your nude buttocks and scrotum with a barbed wire tire swing. I have no tolerance for idiots. Thanks.
[n/a] wLeBlancw @ 198.81.26.172 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 9-Mar-03/12:31 PM | Reply
What is your problem man? You haven't gotten laid lately? Go insult someone else. I am here for poetry not for petty insults.
[9] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 > wLeBlancw | 9-Mar-03/3:12 PM | Reply
Hey, LeBlanc. Go fuckyourself. Your poetry fucking sucks idiot. guess what? Go fuck your teachers too, they did a hoorible job, and also your priest? A fag, yes, a fag, so go fuck yourself, dickchin. I don't like christians, jews, or especially french prolife twits.You must be here for poetry... Because you don't have any.
[9] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 > wLeBlancw | 9-Mar-03/4:06 PM | Reply
Oh, and my problem? Shit poetry from you while we're well on our way to a nucleur winter, therefore, i would say my problem is the denial of this sad backwards fucking country full of shitty poets that right about fetuses hating their fucking parents from heaven idiot, you should give up poetry and go vote for something worthwhile since i can't being that i'm a convicted felon, and planning civilian red dawn type anarchy books for the apocalypse. Fear MABUS the third antichrist. that means the son of bus`h.
[n/a] ==Doylum @ 62.64.224.4 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 9-Mar-03/2:15 PM | Reply
Quick boy take some lacromores we don't want a death by misadventure!!!! You've so much to live for!!!!111
Lots of superlatives followed by something affectionate and a very high score And just as surely lots of exclamation marks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and some random 1111111 and also a random letter perhaps an n or an s to end withv

[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 > wLeBlancw | 9-Mar-03/12:30 PM | Reply
Also; i've seen a woman crush cans with a thirty pound boob, so, and say a woman squirted a pilot in the eye with warm breast milk? EVIL MY FRIEND, a pair upon every chest. the shape of it all. pornography is 75% evil breasts, just check your local liquor store magazine rack, "how can breasts be evil?" open your eyes lad, it's the first thing in your mouth upon birth how can they not be. My mother had ten breasts, and i never got a one, not a one motherfucker, i got my uncles penis in the corner of the cave. NO!!!!!!NO!!!!!!!!!NNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!SOUR MILK, just check the date on the flesh fold man, just check the date.
[9] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 > wLeBlancw | 9-Mar-03/3:14 PM | Reply
How about your face? That would make a splendid metaphor, better then your acting.
[9] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.208.106 | 10-Mar-03/3:24 PM | Reply
Glad to see you can still get fired up. FWOT. the only way.
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