poemranker ::venttent3 by Crakyamuni

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Free verse № 43037

venttent3

Member since 2002 · Posted 8 Mar 2003 · 1 comment

Sometimes they can't hellp but displace their face in a subdued grace without aim or fame they find blame and shame in all that was once held High in the sun- this one wants to see my head on a Golden platter to feed fatter her ego and watch me go out into a society based on denying my race of inherit despairent tendencies Not mending me but steadily sending me out into the thick of this SHOUT-back only to lack a voice,choice,brain, or representation of one who rides sain Main lines- but I stay kind in my own cynicide based chemical waste-land of free hand and caffiend dreams of screams and tears through fears of too much hope and beer.

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[8] INTRANSIT 8-Mar-03/2:36 PM Reply
venting well. some spelling errs. find em. fix em. that is all.