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venttent3 (Free verse) by Crakyamuni
Sometimes they can't hellp but displace their face in a subdued grace
without aim or fame they find blame and shame in all that was once
held High in the sun- this one wants to see my head on a
Golden platter to feed fatter her ego and watch me go
out into a society based on denying my race of inherit despairent
tendencies
Not mending me but steadily sending me out into the thick of this
SHOUT-back only to lack a voice,choice,brain, or representation of one
who rides sain
Main lines- but I stay kind in my own cynicide based chemical waste-
land of free hand and caffiend dreams of screams and tears through fears
of too much hope and beer.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6
Weighted score: 5.0715218
Overall Rank: 6539
Posted: March 8, 2003 2:19 PM PST; Last modified: March 8, 2003 2:19 PM PST
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