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venttent3 (Free verse) by Crakyamuni
Sometimes they can't hellp but displace their face in a subdued grace without aim or fame they find blame and shame in all that was once held High in the sun- this one wants to see my head on a Golden platter to feed fatter her ego and watch me go out into a society based on denying my race of inherit despairent tendencies Not mending me but steadily sending me out into the thick of this SHOUT-back only to lack a voice,choice,brain, or representation of one who rides sain Main lines- but I stay kind in my own cynicide based chemical waste- land of free hand and caffiend dreams of screams and tears through fears of too much hope and beer.

Up the ladder: A Sea
Down the ladder: Why I Chose My Name

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6
Weighted score: 5.0715218
Overall Rank: 6539
Posted: March 8, 2003 2:19 PM PST; Last modified: March 8, 2003 2:19 PM PST
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[8] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.208.106 | 8-Mar-03/2:36 PM | Reply
venting well. some spelling errs. find em. fix em. that is all.
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